Essay pre-writing

An old women stands with a crutch on the top of an hourglass and a young women dances on the bottom.

Parents spend their life time to satisfy the kids, but sometimes the kids don’t notice that or ignore that.

Para1: intro: the background of this card (reddish black) and the description of the scene)
           thesis:Parents spend their life time to satisfy the kids, but sometimes the kids don’t notice that or ignore that.

Para2: topic: love of parents
Life time, crutch, glasses, satisfaction 
Para3: topic: ignoring the love from parentsDance, happiness on her face, immerse her self in her own world
Para4: topic: the sand keep elapsing(time elapses) 
Conclusion
Tony Xu, Amy Yang

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