1. From the assignment, I turned out two different ideas in the poem. I analyze the tone of the poem and also some changes like person and the attitude of the poet and point out that the poet wants the readers to cherish the day and love.
2. I put my own experience to relate to the poem. And I put some details in the introduction to make the essay more catching. I divided the paragraphs. I originally had two paragraphs and I divided them into 4 paragraphs and put some connections between each paragraph.
3. It is hard to add my own emotion to the essay. And it is a little bit hard to find the ideas that the poet wants to express.
4. I can analyze the stanza or sentence specifically and feel the emotion and idea of the poet. My weakness I think is I’m not good at organizing the sentence I write or decide the subsequence of the sentences.
5. I will add more emotions and experience to my essay.
6. Get points:1. On time 2. 500-600 words 3. Body paragraphs helps prove the thesis.
Lose points: 1.grammatical errors 2.body paragraphs have ending sentences 3.conclusion leave the readers something to think about.
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